Meow

Summer? It's winter over here - it's always winter! :D {That's what I love about it... :wink: }

{This might get kind of confusing, but just so you know, I used the form of a girl to portray a snow storm, so be prepared for a weird way ...

Oh, by the way, my favorite was Thinking Spell . I don't know why, but for some reason, I loved it. Even though it was really short, or maybe perhaps ...

Great poem! My favorite parts were: The wicked blade held aloft, whispers death so very soft. and Your darkest dreams will never be, far from the truth as you will ...

One last thing that I forgot to mention, though: When you mean the difference between "showing" instead of "telling" you mean the difference between me actually doing the action istead ...

Jay :Thanks for the positive crit ,it really made my day. I was almost ready to ditch writing when I read the first two ,but yours totally cheered me up. ...

This is great! You should really elaborate on the forgotten tales, or dreams or whatever, because they're really interesting! Also, you should try using pronouns a bit more, 'cause your ...

This revolves around nature quite a bit, doesn't it? It's really good, though the rhythm is off at times. You should work on that a bit. Try reading some of ...

Name: Sakura Age: 15 Academy: Mirage Academy Position: Commander Abilities/Strengths: Dream Keeper/Manipulation Weaknesses: Her sister Sakyla, fire, is slightly afraid of thunder/lightning, and is inc

I'll join! =) Character: Girl Name: Winter Age: 15 Abilities: Can use a bow and arrow, a knife, and a sword. She can wield water magic, but is incapable of ...

(Also, I once wrote a character like you... talking in third person. Was awesome.) Did you really Dreamer? Wow. That makes Meow feel so special! ::hugs herself, smiling:: Thankee for ...

Thankee for the support! *curties* Meow hopes to be friends with all of you! ^^

I've never really written a poem quite like this before, so I'm kind of nervous to be honest...Okay, here goes: My mind is a pathless forest. My soul, a birch ...

Oh and I forgot. technically you CAN hear sights by the vibrations they make, because, if you think about it, a vibration isn't a "sound" in the sense that it's ...

basically, what I wanted to get across was my longing for the ability and the possibility that other worlds exist and that I could go to them. Worlds with magic ...