Mercyemptyinme

I like that this poem focuses on the history side of things :) I learned a lot from it. Keep up the good work! :D

Hi Dante! So first I'll start off with the little grammar things... I see a woman who's life should be in ruins You would want to change the "who's" to ...

Juniper, these are amazing photographs! Anyone can take a picture of a flower, but your photos are so original and beautiful. I look forward to seeing more of them :)

Abigail, I agree with Lava...this is a very cute story! I could just picture the story in my head the whole time I was reading it, and I'm not sure ...

Hi there Jane, First of all I'd like to say that I really enjoyed this piece. The title drew me in at first because it's a big life experience for ...

GoldenQuill - I thought this was a great piece! I was interested until the very end, and the fact that it has a dark, sad tone to it makes it ...

Valteria - Although I tend to write my best poetry when I am sad, I do consider it a hobby of mine that I've fallen out of touch with. I ...

This is a poem I wrote for my Grandmother after she passed away and it was read at her funeral. I hope that by sharing this poem, you will all ...