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Re: LC Excerpt 2 Part 2
To start off with I will first make it very clear that this particular piece of writing is not really my cup of tea. That being said I can definitely ...
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Re: Essay on Anorexia (Rough draft of part 1 & 2)
I found this post very interesting and informative! You seem to know a lot about the topic, and this is something that is important to spread awareness about. Like most ...
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Re: dissimulation
Dannnnggg this one hits hard. It's incredible how you brought such strong emotions to life so vividly in such a short piece. "Pacing like a caged animal around and around ...
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Re: on the rooftop
To start off, great work! I really like how you did this thing--containing so much info in this short little piece that was never actually spelled out. For instance the ...
May 14, 2023 -
Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 108: "The Ambrosia"
This is definitely not my usual genre but I was nonetheless impressed! I can tell you're a very experienced writer. Your use of words is quite impressive, and the story ...
May 14, 2023 -
Re: Christopher Jacobs’ origin: The Playground
This might be the most bizarrely fascinating thing I have ever read. I'm assuming by the title that the (presumably) dead clown and his unfortunate bride become the villains in ...
May 13, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 1.1
Incredible opening!! I love how you only gradually tell us what's going on, starting with something foreboding and uncertain, then working it up until the reader gradually understands what's going ...
May 13, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 19.1
Your dialogue skills are SO STRONG!! You really bring conversation to life with the words you use. Your active descriptions of how your characters speak make it so the reader ...
May 13, 2023
