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Re: Mundane Work (CHP 2) - The Price of Things
I'm back for chapter 2 as promised! Do you have a double-spiced macchiato with extra ice, two pumps of cream, half part almond milk, half part soy milk… actually cut ...
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Re: Mundane Work
Hi! Messy here. Office paranormal humor and horror sounds great, as a fan of the Winchester boys. And this seems to live in the same vein of keeping the public ...
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Re: Bad bloodlines: The culling house (wip title, name suggestions appreciated)
Hi there! This has been in the green room far too long! Let's remedy that. It was just above the thinly carpeted stairs that led up to the bedrooms, just ...
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Re: Casey Bardot-The trouble of Carlos
One more for the road, shall we? Sixteen year old Casey Bardot sat in the back of the car, watching the trees and houses go by I've noticed that you ...
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Re: Marcia’s origin: “Marcia Blythe’s dear love”
Hi creepy. You know the drill. Happy revmo This is a short piece so I don't have a ton to say, but I do have some. You use "who" twice ...
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Re: Mellowed by the sun
Hello hello and happy Review month. Is it as calming as the wake before the sun, or do you dig to find a new layer to call home? I like ...
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Re: 🕰️⚙️Factory’s end ⚙️🕰️
Yay I always love when you slap down some poetry. I think its an underrated part of your game. Shall we begin? Just a few sporadic thoughts. 1. Amelia Badelia ...
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Re: crows about surfing cow
Hi happy Review Day. Or in crow can caaaw caawww caw caaaw I cant believe im going to say this, but i found a typo. Maybe you should jist stick ...
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Re: Letter Two. Ayla's POV
Hi there! Happy Review Day. It's a shame this has sat for so long because I like this piece. Let's hope in to a couple of thoughts. You aren't dead; ...
Aug 30, 2025 -
Re: The Wandering Cyborg, part 1.
Hi, welcome and happy Review Day. Time to get this out of the Green Room with a review! I tend to just jot stuff down chronologically and give some overall ...
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Re: Jackson-Zombies of Mariesville
You already know. Its ya Boi here They also knew of the existence of demons, but that was all. They didn’t know any dark magic, anything about summoning demons. Their ...
Aug 30, 2025 -
Re: Evelyn: Bone Boy
Guess who it is, back on a Review Day. This is becoming something of a tradition. Perhaps I should bring cake next time. Hmm. Okay! I think I remember reading ...
Aug 30, 2025 -
Re: Babbling
Here I am with my woefully inadequate review xD The birds are coming Flocking and bending their necks To catch the fatal glimpse Of when the sun meets the horizon ...
Jun 25, 2025 -
Re: It won’t work out
Hi vamps! Time to to viral and pick up a cold (one) while im at it. I liked the opening. Who is her? What is her? In typical horror fashion, ...
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Re: to my father, from his daughter
Hi Leya! I dont know if I've ever read any of your works before, but this one caught my eye, and after reading it I thought I had to share ...
Jun 16, 2025
