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Hi cherie. Been keeping an eye out for anymore poetey of yours, and here it comes popping into the green room as I do team tortoise. perfecto. "I've been looking ...

hiii Im back for chapter 2! butter and in the other hand, a four pack of Smirnoff. The comma should go after butter, not hand. There was a deck with ...

hi Lynn. Welcome to YWS! I just have a few thoughts to share, and then I'll be on my way. Your title caught my eye. She glares at me with ...

hi tlind :> your caption and rating caught my eyes. Southern Gothic horror? Sounds like a good time Kathy stood in the kitchen like a dead tree stump, waiting on ...

hi lady, back as promised! the evening she writes down the four girls’ names I believe you mean IN the morning. They are the start to a whole new page, ...

hiii happy Friday from a knight of the Green Room and Team Tortoise. Was it the way she broke it? Willingly? Consider putting a period after willingly, or removing the ...

hi Blues. going through some older works for Team Tortoise, and couldn't believe I saw your name! So here i am now that youre a published author haha. of dust-veiled ...

hi there, and happy Wednesday from team tortoise and a knight of the green room. Your title was interesting when paired with the horror genre; let's see what thats all ...

my fingers trace the hole you left when you entered, my skin swollen and tender. This was a great, visceral opening, and a bit icky. But Bambi mentioning Bot Flies ...

hi herb. Here with KOTGR and Team Tortoise. Your description of this piece caught my my eye and so here we are. all the scars that are left on this ...

hi cherie! Happy team tortoise. Since the Green Room has been cleared out I thought id find some poetey to read and relax to. "I wanted to be so cool ...

hi happy Friday from team tortoise and knights of the geeen room! Today I don’t know what I’m going to say. This is an interesting start but it feels like ...

Hi Io! Welcome to YWS (or nice seeing you for the first time). Here on behalf of the Knights of the Green Room and Team Tortoiss! I don't know what ...

hi dystopia! welcome to yws. Let's hop right in, shall we? This particular serial killer, also known as the Countdown Killer, We dont need the AKA because we haven't been ...

Hi Alice - I was going to review your other piece on the green room first, but soooomeone >.> got to it first, so I figured it wouldn't hurt to ...