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Hi, Captain Messy here on Review Day, given this piece some long-desired love! Story 1 - The Door I do really like this, despite having some things for you to ...

hi there! It's a shame this has been inthe Green Room for so long, because I think it deserves more people reading it :) my mother gave me this pearl ...

here as promised :) First of all, these stupid, punny and on-the-nose midwest names cracked me up as a lifelong Midwesterner xD And when one of their teen employees died ...

Hello Hello Lullaby! How the leaves become duo-colored from the sunlight and shadow I actually imagined the leaves when they start to change color, more than I did shadow and ...

Soooound This is so good. Your imagery and similes hit home so well. I love the use of thread the reconnects to the stretching in the first lines. The likening ...

hi vampire! Back for more as promised. “Are you sure she wants to meet me? Why would she want to meet me? This isn’t some kind of joke, is it? ...

I DIDN'T KNOW I HAD A BARD ON MY READING TEAM That was so haunting. I could see it in Arcane, or a montage for any number of shows or ...

hi there, I'm back for more! Ugh. I knew this was coming :( Everything was going too well for it to all end up being okay. Alas, I have some ...

Hello hello, and welcome to YWS! Happy Holidays and happy Review Day! I read part one but since it already had a few a reviews I moved on to Chapter ...

Hello Hello and Happy Review Day! Lots to read here, so let's jump right in. Story 1 - I love a good play on Halloween myths. This actually showed up ...

hi there! Happy Review Day and Happy Holidays! What an intriguing title... I feel it ironic how a company founded on the production of baby soap stumbled across the means ...

hey, I'm back for more! I read chapter 1 but skipped to here to review for Review Day, but I did want to note that this had far fewer nitpicks ...

Hi there! Messy here on review day - happy holidays :) I really like your tone in this opening chapter. I think you convey Deinara's voice very well at times. ...

Hi Vampire! I don't mind some supernatural sleuthing so here I am. I do like the vibe of this piece. It has a fun combination of Hardy Boys/Nancy Drew and ...

Hi there :) Let's jump right in! I debated pulling actual quotes as I read but I think when it comes to the nitpicky side I'll just touch on a ...