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Re: Deus Ex Machina
Hi there! here to give this piece some Green Room love! Whoa. This is so cool. I don't even know how to describe it except that this feels like the ...
Nov 29, 2024 -
Re: Our Love Became My Gallows
hello there! Green Room Knight Messy here in the darkest moments you were my guide. little did I know it was your hands covering my eyes i really like this ...
Nov 29, 2024 -
Re: War And Geese
Hey there. The title caught my eye. The poem did not disappoint. So, a little bit of context: I may or may not have an entire, serious, and just as ...
Apr 30, 2024 -
Re: A love like God's
Hi there. Welcome to YWS! Let's take a look at what you've got here :) And yes, the weed was laced with meth, and when we found out my mother ...
Apr 30, 2024 -
Re: tomorrow, yesterday, and today
Hey there and welcome to YWS :) It has been here as long as I have. At first we did notice its presence. I believe you meant to say that ...
Apr 30, 2024 -
Re: Shine Like A Supernova!
Hi there, here for a little review :) I love the imagery of this poem. The cosmos is such a fun environment to frame any story in, and can be ...
Apr 30, 2024 -
Re: The Exchange student, Chapter 3
Hi there! You asked me a while back for a review and I'm here at least. I really do apologize about the delay, but I think there's a lot to ...
Apr 9, 2024 -
Re: The Potentiality of Infinite Chickens
I was about to be done for the evening, but then I saw the title of this poem, and I thought "There's no way I don't at least do myself ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: A Humble Quest
Hey, I liked your first poem so I thought I would stop by for more :) So, I really like this poem as well. There's this whole untold story that ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: Crystal Cavern
Hey there! here to wind down Review Day and try to bring my team a win while also reading some great poetry! So, here are a few notes for you: ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: Runaway- Chapter 2
Back one more time today and I can say before I even read it that removing the bold lettering already looks better and is easier on the eyes to read. ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: Runaway- Chapter 1.
Back for more as promised. 1. While it was difficult to read the large chunk in the prologue, this is sooo much more. A few tips for breaking your work ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: Runaway-Prologue
Hey there :) welcome to YWS and Happy Review Day! Let's hop in 1. I would personally put a trigger warning for this, especially with hos the last sentence goes, ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: Young Once Again
Hey there and Happy Review Day as we wind down the stretch! Let's get to it 1. I love the overall feeling of raising poem. I always think that poem ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: 31 Hellish Halloween Tales (Part Three) (Tales 22-31)
Hey there! I won't be reviewing all of these in one review, but I want you to get some outside opinions, so let me know once this is out of ...
Oct 28, 2023