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Hey there, and happy review day! Right off the bat, I love the drywall analogy. It's also interesting that whereas you would expect the person being touched to be the ...

Hey there! The title and description intrigued me, and I was not disappointed. As an overall, I really love this piece. I love the WWI setting, I've always found it ...

I'm back with one more for ya! Let's hop in. The rest of the school day passed drearily This is another good example of -ly words. Dreary usually carries the ...

Bonjour la verde It was Monday and the three of them were at the school library, supposedly planning their quest. LOL every group project ever in high school "But what ...

I'm back. Is that menacing or exciting? I don't know. you tell me. o.o Val's eyes sparkled, her previous misfortunes forgotten, and she just managed to stifle a delighted scream. ...

Hi there! Go team green forever ammirite There's not much to say on specifics as this was a short and pretty clean prologue where grammar and the technical aspects are ...

*Ignoring all grammarly tips on poetry is almost comical* hi friend. Let's hop in shall we? The title intrigued me and the poem did not disappoint. there is a strange ...

hi there. First off, welcome to YWS! This poem conjured up a lot of things for me all at once. for one, it reminded me of how Galadriel meets Sauron ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS :) As an overarching comment before I get into specifics, I wanted to say that, much like I used to, you seem to struggle ...

Let's do this. One. Last. Time. I really have been enjoying these. I do think that a girl with pink hair would've stood out more in the last chapter though, ...

Oh man! Bonus content; I'm so in. Hahaha those first few sentences rang so true to me as someone who has a bit of PTSD from an intersection where I ...

Back to finish this off. Wow. I didn't expect this to punch as hard as it did. I knew Lina was likely going to die to sacrifice herself for the ...

Eh, why not wrap this thing up in one day ha! Alright, everything is coming crashing down together at one time. We've had a decent amount of build-up to this ...

Two for One ain't bad, right? Let's get to it. One thing that you may want to keep in mind if you intend to do more short stories, is that ...

Hey, Messy back again. I didn't have any big grammar or prose complaints so just some overall thoughts today. Starting off this chapter you took all the tension out of ...