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Hey Noelle, sorry that I'm so incredibly late! So, I'm still kind of lost on the setting of everything. Not so much as in where we are per se, although ...

Hey Noelle, my concentration levels after work are quickly dropping into the negative hundreds but here I am so yay -_- So, there are a decent amount of grammar nitpicks ...

Hey, I'm back again for at least one more review today. Bazzoli had a hose that Carter could have easily used, except that Bazzoli kept it locked in his private ...

Hey Inks, Mess here weeks late. I just have a jumble of thoughts that I'm going to throw out since you've already got some solid reviews. The sky was growing ...

Hey, here as pormised. She wondered how Janet would feel to know she was so similar to the parent she had this big issue with. My life. ^ I'm Janet. ...

Hey mah dood, I'm here finally. "Before Dad went away last time, we had an argument," Janet said. Ironically she was staring at the spot on the table that Daena ...

Hey Biscuit I'm on mobile so sorry if this gets a little sloppy. It's also past my bedtime but eeeeeh. So. This is definitely shorter so there's not as many ...

Hey Biscy, it's meeee. Couple quick thoughts for you! 1. Man, your writing style is so easy to read. Darkpandemonium got most of the nitpicks out of the way, so ...

Hey Scribbles, it's Mess here for a quick review. Couple of thoughts 1. You've got a couple of small typos. You spelled Alleys as Allies and missed a couple H ...

Hey, I'm here for the last bit you've got out so far Aoliye: Ow-lee-yay Thaaaaank you I was so confused on how to pronounce that name xD Live, die, and ...

Hey, I'm here for part 2! Before starting, I must say that I would advise against the recap. Honestly part 1 is so short, that if someone is reading it ...

Hey, MEssy here for a lil review, so here we go. 1. MAn, that detailed description was just gorgeous!!! I loved thato pening paragraph. A lot of people say that ...

Hey, MEssy here! Just a couple thoughts. First off, I didn't think I'd be reading an essay on my Summer Break from School but eh. So. 1. The facts are ...

Hey, it's Messy Well then, this just went straight to the heart! Apologies is such a delicate and emotional matter sometimes but you just jumped right in! Couple of thoughts. ...

Hey, Mess here. Couple things for you! 1. This is solidly written. You don't go too far into detail, which at first works well, although at the end I would ...