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Hi, here for a quick review. Couple quick thoughts. 1. So this isn't from Violet's viewpoint, but you seem to make the connection that she and you are similar in ...

I'm home mom!! Don't know how long lol anyway Centius the Wise had the flu. Who doesn't right now -_- Philostratus, his robe charred and splattered with ink as usual, ...

Hey! Just for your information before I begin I used to be pretty active on here, but I've been on a long hiatus and am just coming back so sorry ...

Hey! Here to give this my best review in the little time I have left! So, you have a few nitpicky things, like using "Their" for there, and you use ...

hey! This shouldn't have to sit in the green room for this long! That's a shame! So lemme help you out :) What truly why add the truly? is there ...

hey! this does not deserve to be in the cold green room of Unreadness for so long! Luckily I have come to rescue it! reasonably young But reason can differ ...

Hey! I'm here XD Right off the bat I love this poem. It just feels... RIGHT. Makes me remember that poetry can actually be done well by people (me so ...

Hey there! review as requested! Lemme go through the nitpicks first and then I'll get to the actual story. I'm struggling to envision these birds. you talk of wings, but ...

hey, so I just read the first tid-bit with the king reading the letter. Nice descriptions. Gives me a very medievalish feel. also, Skyrim? Or are you just using some ...

heey it's Messy here cot a review in who knows how long. I'm not going to deal with grammar here, I'm just going to focus on the story, so here ...

Hey blue, it's messy here to review for you real quick! Let's start with the positive first! I found this story somewhat amusing. As a child's story I'm sure that ...

Hey night, I'm finally heeeeere to review as I promised. So let's get started!! :) Well, I really liked this. The color of red being a focus was quite blatantly ...

Hey, Messy here you his 550th review on YWS! (Which I also get a blue star) So, this wasn't a badly written chapter. You did have a few typos, but ...

Hey, Messy here to give you a review! Shall we begin? Whoa. First off, I liked your ending. Nice and creepy and magicallish. (which should totally be a word) Anyways, ...

Hey, I'm messy! Shall I give you a review? Well first off, before I get to the meat of this poem, I have to say that I'm kind of indecisive ...