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Hi Alice - I was going to review your other piece on the green room first, but soooomeone >.> got to it first, so I figured it wouldn't hurt to ...

Hi Spark! I don't know if I've ever read any of your prose before, and the title caught my eye, so here I am. Although, let's be honest, this is ...

hiii I'm back again, Alice! I think I'll try to get to the rest of this folder as part of my team Tortoise, even if they get knocked out of ...

Hiii I see that this is part of perhaps a larger world, but I hope that doesn't hinder me from being able to give you some good feedback on this ...

Hi creepy! Here for the Knights Afterwatch! Endoskeletons caught my eye, so let's jump in. And I’m thinking that we could open up locations all around Utah, maybe around America, ...

hiii happy review day. I hope all the feedback on this finds you well :] as a dad now there's a few things in here that just hit in ways ...

dun dun dun we have finally reached the end..Not.fonna lie that was a LOT of reading to do in one day but at least im finally caught up. Where to ...

okay so in light of recent events and devolved information, I am more just going to ramble here and not bother with quotations for a lot of what will probably ...

ignore what I rambled about chapter 18 being the end, im at the point where I cant even read a chapter index properly apparently. Anyway, side note, but yay for ...

and we. are. back. This looks like a shorter chapter (yay for mobile reviews) The adrenaline from the mission still hadn’t worn off. James was sprawled out in the common ...

The castle had been in a sot of tensioned quiet chaos since the meeting with the archduke tensioner quiet chaos....i feel like there's a better way to put this. Maybe ...

I am back again OBVIOUSLY. I remember this chapter vaguely from before but im curious to see if James has changed a bit and how this affects the pacing. It ...

Verena didn’t remember her hat falling off or losing her shoes. She just knew James was falling, and she wasn’t there. eeeeeasily your best opening line. I think adding on ...

CHICKENS.....ASSEMBLE. BLAAAAAH So, right off rip we are just using "he". i can infer it's james as this is a dual pov but consider either mentioning his name, or added ...

She skimmed the rest of the summary below the headline. Since last night's debacle, it seemed that someone, It didn’t name who, had made a statement has been made that ...