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  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 1: Enemies We Were, What Are We Now?

    Hiya, it is your local Messenger for a brief review! just here for quick nitpicks! His calm features contorted into a frown. "So, it is," he said, "that you hate ...

    May 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 3 Part 2

    I am back Noelle! Hahahaha I am now ahead of everyone *laughs evilly* and you said I needed to catch up :) Anyways, let's see if Ida has anything worth ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 3 Part 1

    Hi Noelle, I am finally back. Wow this chapter looks so short after reading Pies' chapter. xDDD Anyway, shall we hop into the review! We made her tea. Halfway through ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prakfura Raiders: Prologue And Chapter One

    Hey Pies, I am back as promised! So, shall we rip this things to shreds as I am completely incapable of doing? OK, good then, let's do it. :) “Aley! ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Dragon Boy Chapter 1

    Hey Sunshine, I am here to review . . . and smile a lot. The most powerful of us could appear human Are you sure you mean "could"? Shouldn't it ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prakfura Raiders: Prologue And Chapter One

    Hey, I am going to just review the prologue tonight and get to the other chapters tomorrow because it is late here. Sorry for arriving so late. The stumble downhill ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Terra Duenuo - Chapter 1

    Hi, Messenger here to give you a review and scoot this puppy out of the Green! Oh, and I am claiming it as a Knight of The Green Room, which ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Review Re: Refutations to Arguments Trying to Prove God's Nonexistence

    Hey life, thought I'd make a few comments here. I think you stayed true to the questions., You didn't stray away from them. You didn't attack the questioneer, which is ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The future of 'merica

    Hey Monsters. I read this, and to be honest, I'm a little confused. I feel like you made some very good points, the fact that our president and the government ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Faded Memory Chapter Six

    Hi Soulkana, I finally found this still in the Green Room! As a Knight of The Green Room, I hereby declare that I shall do all I can to get ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)

    Hi! I completely forgot about this, I'm so sorry. But, alas I have finally made it. Please don't kill me :) So, shall we begin! Well, this felt really weird ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: I wanted to be Cinderella.

    Hi . . . I was planning on keeping my mouth shut about this one, but the last few lines snagged my eyes. I must wear these gender appropriate rags. ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Long Weekend: Part 1.

    Messenger is here, as you requested on my thread! So let's get to the review! :) plain prick houses that ran parallel along each side of the road. Prick? I ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 2 Part 2

    Bee-do bee-do- bee-do . . . Hi, tis me! The kingdom was always quiet at night. And not just because everyone was asleep. The guards were always out in full ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 2 Part 1

    Hi Noelle, I'm baaack! Wow did Birkhoff go through this with a fine comb! Cara’s mother thankfully didn’t ask many questions and let him stay for that amount of time. ...

    Apr 30, 2014


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— Sylvia Plath