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Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 1 Part 2
Hey Noelle, I'm back. I want my stars, and the start to this story seems interesting, so you can start adding me to the list of followers you have! Shall ...
Apr 30, 2014 -
Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 1 Part 1
Hi Noelle, I thought I'd return the favor for all those reviews! Me iz catching up to you too Mwahahahaha!!! “Please,” Milo begged. “Please, Father.” Oh dear, what a nice ...
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Re: The Robot Girl
Well I decided I'd check out another one of your poems, since four out of the last five have been extremely amazing! Happy Review Day! now to get into the ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Your lips.
Hi Retro, it's me again! I have too say that even before I read this, I'm looking forward to it The title gives just enough info to make me want ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Reality Time
Hi, Messenger here to review this for you on Review Day! Got Team Red!! So, shall we begin?!?! Wow this was . . . strange, although not necessarily in a ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Blossoming Love
He Tulip, your fellow robot fighter is here xDD Well this is a lovely little poem you have here. I never felt it to be clunky as the previous reviewer ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Missing: Hellhound, black, size of a horse, likes belly rubs (a "The Book Man" fanfiction)
Hieee! A HUUUUGE TBM fan (actually I just finished reading it today!) When they had had a lovely dinner, courtesy to Liza, no thanks to Conrad, who still looked out ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Story of Jason Griffin ~ Snippets 1-6
Hey, mine name is Messenger. Welcome to YWS! This is extremely long, and I'd advise posting it in parts. I'll review the prologue part until the first asterisks! Oh, and ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: All for one
Messenger to review for you on this gloriously exciting Review Day! Yet there is no we in this life I'd suggest putting 'we' in quotation marks.And also there are a ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Thunder is just a noise.
Hi retro, Messenger is back to read another one of your poems. Happy Review Day too!!! When are you going to get published! you got de skillz XDD But in ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: We All Start Somewhere
Hi! Happy Review Day from the Red Team! Messenger here to review four you. Well the reviews below pointed out all the nitpicks it looks like. So I won't talk ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 58 (Revised)
Hi . . . . *glares at Blue* I'm back. And my emotions are flip-flopping, so I'm just going to go ahead and read this to get my hopes crushed ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 57 (Revised)
Messenger is back with just afew chapters to go!!!!! Wha . . wait . . . what!?!?!?! You . . but . . . BLUE!!!!!!! WHAT> DID> YOU> JUST> DO! ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 56 (Revised)
I'm back and . . .wow. I mean I'm suddenly looking at this story from a whole new angle. This is lovely. I just . . . . gaah must ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 54-55 (Revised)
Messenger is baaaack! you have no idea how excited I am getting!We finally get to hear Goblin's side of the story, and maybe get a not-so-horribly-evil-villain thingy! Maybe they can ...
Apr 27, 2014
