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Re: The Book Man, Chapter 37 (Revised)
Hi, I'm back. *noms dinner* yes I had to get food. Must stay brain-nourished on Review Day. Wait. . . . Ronin? He's gonna be in this chapter!!! *Dances* They ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 37 (Revised)
Hi, I'm back. *noms dinner* yes I had to get food. Must stay brain-nourished on Review Day. Wait. . . . Ronin? He's gonna be in this chapter!!! *Dances* They ...
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Re: Freedom
Hi, Messenger here to review for you on ReviewDay!!! So, I see you have gotten two short reviews, but to tell you the truth, there isn't really much more to ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Broken Child
Hey Lylas, Messenger here to review for you on Review Day! Well this poem is just so . . . . it's so potent. So full of feeling and meaning. ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 37 (Revised)
Guess who's back!!!!!!!! MEEEE!!!!!! Oh, and before I get into the story itself, I', not too keen about your change for the chapter title. I liked the bold. Especially since ...
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Re: Inquiry <Title Pending> - Prologue
Heyoo Vype! Messenger here for a quick, or not so-quick review as requested! “You have a lot of questions.” She has only asked two previous questions, one of which was ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Pen, Paper, and a Gun - Prologue
Messenger here for you as requested! “Which one of you would like to claim responsibility for these illegal acts?” Oh my. . . . did not see that coming :P ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter One
Guess who's here? Yup your local Messenger! I have to admit before I begin that this looks a little longer then I'm used to. But I promised!! And I'm the ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: A Thought On Why We Oppose Homosexuality and Lesbianism
Hi, Messenger here for you, and without even going into the subject of this work, you have one major issues. You have NO paragraphs. It a huge chunk of words! ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Devil Touch Prologue (New)
Messenger is finalllllly here so sorry. Life and sickness and all that gooey stuff has been clogging up the roads to this work, but alas I have finally arrived as ...
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 35-36 (Revised)
Messenger is back again today for more. At least these two chapters for now, but probably several more before the day is over. Well so much for a cool angel. ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 32-34 (Revised)
I really need to figure out how to make a more interesting entrance. Like every time it is the exact same thing and I hate that >.< Anyway, I passed ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 29-31 (Revised)
And me is back for more Blue, and I better see something to nitpick. J Well done stories are nice to read to, but it makes getting points harder. “Ouch,” ...
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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 27-28 (Revised)
Messenger is back, starving, and ready for more! RAWR! Something brushed against his thigh. desgivtb jgfnhtrbhb *Shivers up and down my spine go* So terrifying not knowing what it is. ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 26 (Revised)
Messenger is back!! Hooray! So not the review. Christian picked up a bucket, ready to swing it at whatever might appear, but the next moment a frightened garden gnome waddled ...
Apr 9, 2014
