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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 18-20 (Revised)
It be Messenger back for more because I just can't resist your writing, and my team need some more points to keep the lead! :P So shall we begin? A ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 17 (Revised)
And I am back for the second chapter. These one are actually a little longer than some of your previous ones but still a nice easy size to read, digest, ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 17 (Revised)
I'm back to do another review on each chapter for you, and I am dying of curiosity. And worrying. So without further ado let's begin! At the back, sitting in ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 15-16 (Revised)
Messenger back for once last time! I am super-duper excited to see the garden awake. Ever since Christian entered I was hoping we would see it, and then when the ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 15-16 (Revised)
And I'm back! My team needs more points and I wouldn't be getting very many for the amount of stuff I wrote so yeah . . . .hey at least ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 15-16 (Revised)
Messenger here once again!Man I have the same intro every time, I really ought to work on that :P But that would be cheating if I made it longer and ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 14 (Revised)
Messenger here for you again!!!! And I can't wait to see what comes next! I forgot to tell you this last time, but I really like your use of chapters. ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 12-13 (Revised)
Messenger here for you again! I just realized I'll soon be reading the twentieth chapter and I can't believe it! This story is just reeling me in so I can't ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 11 (Revised)
Messenger back for you and it looks like I finally passed Deanie! Not that you care but . . . yeah. So shall we get down to business. . . ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 9-10 (Revised)
Messenger back for more! RAWR!! So I can't wait to see Conrad's tale. Let's get into this. Conrad grinned. “Oh, I’m a young man in my prime. I’ll be—let’s see—one ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 8 (Revised)
Messenger back after a short break from your wonderful story! So let's get back to business for the Scarlet Swords birdsong . First time I've ever heard that word but ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Godly
Messenger here for you. Well I agree with KnightTeen on two things: I don't like your attitude in this poem because I am a Christian, but I d respect your ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Title
Messenger here for you on an exciting Review Day! So I am guessing the crazy line break-ups and choppy lines are a mistake. IF the aren't you need to fix ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 7 (Revised)
Messenger here for you . . .again. Getting tired of me? Too bad if you are because I AM NOT LEAVING UNTIL AT LEAST CONRAD GETS HELP. Actually I am ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 6 (Revised)
And I'm back! You know you are providing me with plenty of material to get points for my team! But in all honesty I was searching for a book to ...
Mar 30, 2014