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Messenger here to review for you! And I- WHOOOOOA! Tha-th-that was such a shocking ending. I wasn't expecting it at all! Well done there. I have to say that your ...

Messenger here to review for you! Uh. . . . I have to say I am a little confused. The very first line runs straight from the title, but I ...

Messenger here to review for you! I will tell you this, I saw hardly any, if any, problems technicality-wise in this chapter. IT is a smooth read. Not to hard ...

Messenger here to review! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! It is back!! *Starts up chant* Oh sorry. Calms down. OK, now to the review. My long black hair has grown stringy from lack of ...

oh my word my mom started knocking on something halfway through reading this. I nearly jumped it scared me so bad. :D. but this was really good. I loved how ...

Messenger here for you! Lucrezia I believe this is one of your first works that I have ever reviewed, and I have to say that this was a good one! ...

Messenger here to review for you after an exhilarating Review Day! Oh.My.Word.I.Don't.Know.What.To.Say. I mean seriously you wrote everything about temptation perfectly. I liked the part with the blan

Messenger here to review for you, and for the Cobalt Critiquers! It was a girl, the long hair gave that away easily, and her face was largely obscured by dirt, ...

Messenger here for you. I thought I'd be fair and continue reading at least the next chapter to make sure my first impression was not misplaced. So! “I knocked a ...

Messenger here for you on a hectic Review Day! If you like happy endings where the guy gets the girl or the girl gets the guy, you will be sadly ...

Messenger here for you to give you a review on the Crazy Review Day! She laughed, and it was hard. First off, this is the only nitpick/error in the whole ...

Messenger here for you! Happy Reviews Day! *fireworks go off!* First thing I noticed was that you called the dragon a "thing" about twenty times it seemed like. I mean ...

Messenger here for you! Happy Review Day riddler!:) I had to go read other comments to get what this was. I think you need to tell people it's a riddle. ...

Messenger here for a review on Review Day! Shadrach took a final look around before planting his sword into the ground and sitting down. He slowly began to practice the ...

Messenger here to review for ya again! Happy Review Day, Go Team Blue! Oh boy, only two more chapters and I am all caught up with you! BTW, how old ...