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Messenger here for you! Happy Review Day! “Only because you burnt her on the spot.” The memory of the attack caused Ordyn to wince slightly There were many lines in ...

Messenger here for you on review Day! Oh my. I mean . . . oh my that was terrifying. I was literally on the edge of my seat. I was ...

Messenger here to review for ya on Happy Review Day! “Mom!” She whispered. Sighing she wrapped it up in the oil cloth again and stuck it in her bag, trying ...

Messenger here to review for you Buggie! Your name makes me laugh BTW. And your avatar is cool. But anyway, this is a review, not a glotation over you avvie! ...

Messenger here for you! Happy Review Day opposing team member. Wait . . . you are a Christian? I had no idea. That's really cool and awesome! Well this is ...

Messenger here for you! The rumours flew, that the boy found another girl. Get rid of the comma there isn't necessary. There wee a couple others places where I may ...

Messenger here to review for you again! Oooooh! when I saw it was about Sulryn I was super excited, and when I saw it was a pretty good length I ...

Messenger here you as you requested! Happy Review Day! So, I agree with all that Locke says. The twist off a common fairy tale is awesome . Actually at first ...

Messenger here for you again! Happy Review Day! Getting tired of my reviews? I hope not. Hopefully they are helping you in your writing. Well this is the first chapter ...

Messenger here for you again! Happy Review Day! The only way into the castle was a drawbridge that was never brought down unless Baron Harold needed to leave, How do ...

Messenger here for ya! Oh and no reviews so far so I can get extra points! Happy Review Day. “Please, my Baron,” begged Councilman Onskel Aldemaw, his gaunt face pleading ...

Messenger to review for ya again! I'm sticking with you. As he reached the doors of Oldver’s quarters, Arryn paused when he heard the yelling of Oldver and an unfamiliar ...

Hey! Messenger here for ya! This was great! I loved how you begin. It intrigues the reader immediately. You pose questions we now want answered. Who is the woman? Who ...

Messenger here for ya again! He looked to his left and saw a rotting corpse. He looked to his right and saw bars. The soldiers had thrown him into Whiteholt’s ...

Hey, I liked it Magenta. Few lines that seems too long though: Best of luck I wish to you and you. Just write you once and remove the "and". It ...