Messenger

The Messenger here to review for ya, because I saw rhia's emotional review. And she had good cause for it. This was a sad and yet happy story. I love ...

Heya, Messenger here for ya! This will be a short review, simply because there isn't really much to nitpick on, Basically everything looks in order. I like the idea behind ...

Messenger here for ya! Wow! That was amazing. The transitioning between the two characters really improved the story. I figured all along what was going to happen, but I would ...

Messenger here for you . I saw this back when it was in the green room but didn't take the time to review it. Now I am! This was actually ...

Messenger here for ya! I was just meandering in your portfolio and came across this. The first few lines caught my attention so I had to read it. And it ...

Messenger here for ya, as requested! . . . hastily scraped his muddy boots on the doormat outside his home, . . . still hopelessly covered in mud as he ...

Horrendous found this funny, but I didn't. Particularly the part about the kids who need food and water. That is a very real sad thing that is going on, and ...

Hiya! Messenger here to review for ya! which put our family into a state not of panic, but of preparation; This line seems kind of messed up. The part about ...

Messenger here to review for ya! I was really happy to see another song up by you, because I hadn't seen any in a while it seemed like. So, review: ...

The Messenger here to review for ya! So, I really like your idea here. It is a spooky idea, and leaving no explanation is fine. It adds to the suspense. ...

Messenger here to review for Ya! Well this was short. A lot shorter than most poems, but you know what? It was just as good. One thing I am really ...

Messenger here to review for ya! So, I felt that although ( as CamorynAnn said) I love the descriptive words, and that you were able to bring every emotion in ...

Hi. Messenger here to review for ya! First thing I noticed was that you kept on going in and out of past tense and present tense. It really makes things ...

Hi. Messenger here to review for ya! Only the sign remains, rotted away from years of abuse, cocked to one side crookedly. Out in the middle of what had been ...

Messenger here to review. Whooooooooooa! That was long and full of stuff. OK, so, you switch from past tense to present back and forth like crazy. Form the most part ...