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the Messenger Knight here to review. OK,m so you really did fool me with this. Even when I saw how short it is but hadn't read it, I was thinking ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you, as promised. So if I see anything I think could be fixed I will list it below. First off: "Why does it ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you. Happy Review Day!!! so, I am not sure why this is all in italic. It might have been formatting problems, which I ...

The Messenger here to review for you Snoink! Happy Review Day!!! Hehehehehe. That was funny. Sounds like stories I've heard, and siblings I have with such problems. Very funny haiku ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for Happy Review Day! I fly above a concrete jungle, A bird's-eye view of a cement paradise. I think you don't have to put ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for Happy Review Day!!!! "Please don't do it! It's too strong, even for a big Amazon like you! Please, don't go!" cried the youth. ...

The Messenger Knight here to review Happy Review Day! "You should be sleeping Isabel, You need a comma after sleeping, I think. "Why me?! Surely, Gen should be the one ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you, and KotGR. Happy Review Day! you shall be expecting it to come every day. The bold word needs to be added. I ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! Merin sat with her legs crossed on her hard cot in the dark room one of the sisters had ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! So, I would just say this: re-read and find out how many times you start a sentence with "Th" ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you. Last one for tonight on Review Day!! So, big problem: Punctuation. It makes reading this hard for me and others. I don't ...

the Messenger Knight here to review for you on Review Day. I saw your request on your wall and thought I'd oblige. So, glad I got to this after it ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you on Review Day!! So, I think the first three paragraphs could all be connected. Because they all star with "And" it, at ...

The Messenger Knight here to review on a wonderful review day, full of wonderful reviews. So, what have we got here? Oh, a haiku? I like those! Anyway . . ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR on a Review Day!!!! So, I really liked how you used the metaphor of flying like a bird, and the metaphor of ...