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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Scar

    The Messenger Knight here to review for you again, as a KotGR, on a wonderful Review Day! Each time the walls got smaller,my soul shrank with it. Trapped in your ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Shimmer II: Unicorn Genocide - Chapter 1

    The Messenger Knight Here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! There was a small movement in the grass, near what used to be a healer’s cottage. You can cut ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Skylar, I'm Coming Home

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. where I can stand without thoughts of fears, The comma needs to be switched to a period. to return back to your ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Health, General Re: How does giving up smoking affect lives?

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! Smoking is inhaling smoke from burning paper and tobacco using a cigarette. I think a comma is needed after ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Ennui (The Media Center)

    the Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. Happy review day! like soggy rope Underneath the sea without hope Oh boy, this really threw me off. In fact a lot ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Count To Ten

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! So, I was going to show you which part I liked best in this poem. all of it! I ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tendencies

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Anything that managed to only splattered. I am confused with this line. I am assuming you have some typo or grammar error. ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Unbroken

    The Messenger here to review! Happy Review Day! The doctors dressed in green smocks and masks poked and prodded me, stabbing needles into my arm and listening to my heart. ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dreamers/Fighters

    the Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! :) your first paragraph was lovely and I didn't see any problems. and forced no longer himself to play ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science Re: Chemistry

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. Happy Review Day!!!! Use your eyes of cells, atoms, electrons, protons Open and see That everything and everyone Aren't that different after ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Alone

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Here on Review Day!!!! I will build a house in the woods, let me accompany the silence, I think you should change ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: SlushySlapped

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. Happy Review Day!!!!:) So, I recall reading some romantic poetry a few weeks ago that I immensely enjoyed, and I don't think ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Letting You In. (Jcsmooth)

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day!!!!:) So, I liked this a lot. Having the recurring lines of "They whisper let us in . . . ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 37

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. And you are my first reviewer on Review Day!! So, right of the bat I noticed that you have no capitalization. That ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Undecided Title :)

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. “Ugh,” he muttered, I don't think 'ugh' goes well in this line. Maybe add he groaned, but I think ugh just sounds ...

    Oct 26, 2013


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