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Re: My Scar
The Messenger Knight here to review for you again, as a KotGR, on a wonderful Review Day! Each time the walls got smaller,my soul shrank with it. Trapped in your ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Shimmer II: Unicorn Genocide - Chapter 1
The Messenger Knight Here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! There was a small movement in the grass, near what used to be a healer’s cottage. You can cut ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Dear Skylar, I'm Coming Home
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. where I can stand without thoughts of fears, The comma needs to be switched to a period. to return back to your ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: How does giving up smoking affect lives?
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! Smoking is inhaling smoke from burning paper and tobacco using a cigarette. I think a comma is needed after ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Ennui (The Media Center)
the Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. Happy review day! like soggy rope Underneath the sea without hope Oh boy, this really threw me off. In fact a lot ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Count To Ten
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! So, I was going to show you which part I liked best in this poem. all of it! I ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Tendencies
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Anything that managed to only splattered. I am confused with this line. I am assuming you have some typo or grammar error. ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken
The Messenger here to review! Happy Review Day! The doctors dressed in green smocks and masks poked and prodded me, stabbing needles into my arm and listening to my heart. ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Dreamers/Fighters
the Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! :) your first paragraph was lovely and I didn't see any problems. and forced no longer himself to play ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Chemistry
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. Happy Review Day!!!! Use your eyes of cells, atoms, electrons, protons Open and see That everything and everyone Aren't that different after ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Alone
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Here on Review Day!!!! I will build a house in the woods, let me accompany the silence, I think you should change ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: SlushySlapped
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. Happy Review Day!!!!:) So, I recall reading some romantic poetry a few weeks ago that I immensely enjoyed, and I don't think ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Letting You In. (Jcsmooth)
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day!!!!:) So, I liked this a lot. Having the recurring lines of "They whisper let us in . . . ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Deleted 37
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. And you are my first reviewer on Review Day!! So, right of the bat I noticed that you have no capitalization. That ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Undecided Title :)
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. “Ugh,” he muttered, I don't think 'ugh' goes well in this line. Maybe add he groaned, but I think ugh just sounds ...
Oct 26, 2013
