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Re: The Hybrids (chapter 1)
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Do I dare look behind me, dare see if I have any chance of escape, or do I give into the fear ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Pressure
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, Iggy got some of the main points, but I feel kind of . . empty after this. I think you have ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: To The One I Never Knew
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, Disk got most of the stuff on the line-by-line, although I didn't read it all, so forgive me if this was ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Evacuation
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. so, this is a chilling line Shabbily dressed children stood silently holding luggage, every bone in their frail bodies pronounced, a dead ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Miracle Worker
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Oh goodie, another one?!?! *Is delighted* Onto the review. A miracle working God I think you could put a dash to connect ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: "Abandoned" Part 2
The Messenger Knight here to review for you! So, finally got to this. I see you got some good reviews though, so happy about that. Now, onto my own. so ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Free At Last
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, I have been faithfully following your posts and loved this one just like all of your others. This is almost written ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Under the Influence
The Messenger Knight here to review for you and the KotGR. So first off, glad to see this up after hearing about it and trying to help you decided your ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Days of Gold Gone By: Ep.Four
The Messenger Knight here to review. So, the beginning was awesome, and although obviously you were trying to make it metaphoric, that can be done wrong. You executed it perfectly. ...
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: A Lost Cause - Ch 2
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, this was a great second chapter, and emjayc covered most of the things I was going to point out, but let ...
Oct 24, 2013 -
Re: Prank Wars
The Messenger Knight here to review . . . . . Uh . . . What do I say? I don't get this at all. Script or not you have ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: I Remember Peru
Wait, you got to go to Peru? *Huffs* Oh Hi, I'm here to review for you :) You don't have any punctuation when there is talking, but besides that your ...
Oct 21, 2013 -
Re: A Lost Cause - Ch 1
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. SO, the first two paragraphs felt too fast for me, but after that I was into it all the way. I really ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: sometimes
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So the biggest bug in this is the fact that you have no punctuation. Not only does it not look as good, ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Her
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, no punctuation? :( No, no no . . .!!!! Can't take it. OK, so *Recomposes* This is actually a quite nice ...
Oct 18, 2013