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Re: "Abandoned" Part 1
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So this review is basically technical stuff since this poem for me didn't say a whole lot. I think a part 2 ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: My Lord, My Savior
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. I shall not lay thee head, down on the devils pillow, but knell at the feet, of my lord, for he is ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Crucifix
The MEssenger Knight here to review for KotGR. First off I'm a Christian, so I was happy to see this. Marry kneels at my feet. She cries and begs the ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: From Us Teens
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. And guess what: this is going to be my 300th review. Aren't you lucky? Probably not.:) *Organizes himself for review.* I really ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Strengths of the U.S. Constitution & Government System
The Messenger Knight here, and after reading Dragon's review I don't have a whole lot to fill this review with. :) Let me say that the revised first line is ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Lost in your words
The Messenger Knight here to review for your today, and for my KotGR. OK, so you don't have i capitalized every time that it is speaking about yourself. This is ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Rachel Rose
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. I was really enjoying this until these spots where I noticed a few technical errors. I want to hold you close, never ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Basketball Heart
The Messenger Knight here to review for you, and KotGR. So, I really liked this piece. It was well written, and I liked how you transitioned from paragraph to poem ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Fantastical Book 1: The Mirror (Chapter Two)
The Messenger Knight here to review faithfully for KotGR. but they knew that nothing would help, only make things worse for them. I just feel like this line is wrong. ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: No More
The Messenger Knight here to review your work for KotGR. Let's see what you got.:) No more avoiding the dark alleys No more running away from the shadows No more ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: A Collection of Haiku
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, I really liked this compilation, although fortis is right about the switch from beautiful nature, to all of a sudden these ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: Days of Gold Gone By: Ep.Three
the Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. first off lemme say Yay! for episode three, I am really enjoying this story. Behind the hall is a puddle of light, ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: Drips of Blood
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, I thought this was very beautifully written, and great description/imagery. But I think you need to be more descriptive in telling ...
Oct 14, 2013 -
Re: When My Life Took A Sudden Turn.
the Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. And made me feel no special. I never showed off;My talent nor skill. Everyone has one, we all know, Until someone recognized ...
Oct 11, 2013 -
Re: My story.
The Messenger Knight here to review. So, I really, really, really liked this story/ life experience, but you had some big errors. 1. You have "i" all over the place, ...
Oct 11, 2013