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Re: strangers
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Wow, that first paragraph was not expected. It was so powerful to me. I think I think about stuff like that more ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: Yes.
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So there isn't a ton to say on this piece of literature. But it was quite interesting and enjoyable to read. I ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: Emerson Essay
The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR. OK, huge font but probably just an error so I won't spend a bunch of time on it. Now, (Onyx pointed out ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: Penguin at the Bottom
The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR. So, I thought your story was all fine until this line. The penguin at the bottom, his name is Mr. Penguin. that ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: Hope- A Solicit Sight.
The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR. This is your second review so this will be out of the green room, so I wanted to give you as much ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: The footsteps
The Knight Messenger here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So overall this was pretty well done, and I liked the time period that you used, but ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: I saved the world!
The Messenger Knight here to review for the KotGR. So first off I was going to upset because you weren't telling me anything about how you saved the world . ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: Secret Walls: Prologue
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, this was a really good prologue that grabbed me. I thought you did a superb job of showing the readers how ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: King Of The Sky
The Knight Messenger here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. so, I had read a poem about flying, as well s one short story, and I loved ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Lost in the Wind
The Messenger Knight here to review. so, like Dark Knight, the title caught my view, as did the poem itself. I had to say though that I knew where it ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: teenager
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, I saw no problems up to this point: The one of the distraction of the teenagers is on personal that ruin ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Capture
The Messenger Knight here to review for the KotGR. May I say that your first paragraph is one of the best, most eye-catching I've ever read. Those are the signs ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Repaid
The Messenger knight here to review for KotGR. So I was actually quite excited when I saw the description and began reading. I haven't seen any poems before written Shakespearean ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Sweatshops
The Messenger Knight here to review for the KotGR. So I liked how this was written out and the whole history of the Main Character's life, as well as how ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: I had warned you.
The Messenger Knight here with the first of three promised KotGR reviews. So, this was beautiful. I couldn't stop reading it. You had such imagery, such descriptiveness, and such detail. ...
Oct 7, 2013
