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Re: The Man in the tower, Chapter 2 Contiued
Knight Malachi here to Review for the KotGR. Whoa, whoa, whoa!!!! Hang on here. Let's re-read these first few lines. running to get out of there i hear a big ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Technology: What would be life without it?
Knight Malachi here to revie for the Knights of the Green Room. First off, welcome to YWS. I hope you learn a lot of stuff here. Technologies significantly affect human ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: A Brand Matters
Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR. First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy t his website as much as I have. I hope it will help you in ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Effects of Technology
Knight Malachi here to review. First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time on here, and learn lots of new stuff. So before I begin the ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: "Technology - in various ways"
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. First off, welcome to YWS! I am sure you will love this site as much as I have., ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Every Prayer
Knight Malachi here to do a final review for the day, for the KotGR And a perfect one to top off the day. I have to say thank you for ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Saved From the Fall
Knight Malachi here to review for Knights of the Green Room. So the rhythm of this was pretty good except in a few parts. Here they are. 1. They say ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Challenge Accepted.
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So I couldn't find any punctuation or spelling errors in here ;) I have to say that as ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Dumb Poetry
Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR. So this is actually very true sometimes. I always feel like I'm looking for something deeper, and sometimes there is, but sometimes there ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Adventures at Evening (experimentation with iambic pentameter)
Knight Malachi here to review for the KotGR So number one thing I have to say is that when I saw every line rhymed my mouth went :OOOO I was ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Perfect: Chapter 1
Knight Malachi here to Review for the Knights of the green Room. This is the only error I saw. It should be him instead of his. All of us look ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: The Cat's Quest-Ch 1
Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR. So, I saw a few typos, but my apologies I can't re-find them. Anyway, I found one or two punctuation problems as well, ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Dying Embers
Knight Malachi here to review. I probably would've this sooner, had I not missed it in the green room. Now, onto the review. I agree with Griffin about your detail ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 5
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. First off I would like to say that I liked being able to understand what was going on, ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Foxtrot
Knight Malachi here to review So this poem was a cool poem. I really liked reading it. It seemed like a pretty light and fun poem at first, but as ...
Sep 30, 2013