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Re: Removing The Mask ~ Chapter One
Hi, I was going to review this, but when I saw how long it was I said uh-uh. This too long. Sorry, but I know of only 2 or 3 ...
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Re: Princess.
Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR So I loved this poem. I liked what it was about, and how you completed the story. Going from what a princess usually ...
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Re: Desperado
Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR So this poem was very well written, very well described and had a lot of metaphoric language in it which was good, but ...
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Re: Those Sidelines Matter
Knight Malachi here to resume work for the Knights of the Green Room I noticed one little mistake right away. not a big one though. The period here should be ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Welcome To Hell
Knight Malachi here to review. So Dragon swept the problems into one review, and I will tell you what I thought of the context. It was very descriptive, and easy ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Tricks
Knight Malachi with the Knights of the Green Room here to review for you. So I had to re-read this poem to get it. But don't take that as a ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: I am me
Knight Malachi here to review, trying to clean up the Green Room. So this is a really cool format. I liked it, and there aren't a lot of poems wit ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: What day is it?
Knight Malachi here, exhausted, weary, yet super-duper excited after Review Day. This is a great poem to capture what I, along with all the other contestants went through. Hats off ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Martin
Knight Malachi here to review with less than 3 minutes to go for Review Day. This was a nice little poem about something so simple-a pond- and yet you turned ...
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Re: Clockwork
Knight Malachi here to review on Review Day!!!! so to be honest I don't all of what you are saying in this poem, but it was very very well written. ...
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Re: Once is Never Enough
Knight Malachi here to review as Review Day comes to a close in a nail-biter. This is exactly how I feel. I always have all these ideas, and think of ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Falling For Science
Knight Malachi here to review.Boy is Review Day stressful! Whew! So that in a way a super-duper cool way to write this with all the different scientific stuff. Not something ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Me (for lack of a better title)
Knight Malachi here to review on a hectic and very competitive Review Day> On top of it being my first one. Whew! First of all think this is a cool ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Freedom
Knight Malachi here to review. So first of all there are typos galore, like all over the place. Examples: If you want something, g find someone Should be go, not ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: A writer's life
Knight Malachi here to Review my fellow team blue comrade, as we near the end of Review Day. What can I say ?That you hit it right on the head ...
Sep 29, 2013
