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Re: Ostara
Knight Malachi here to review on this crazily awesome Review Day. So this poem is really pretty, and I really like how you described the natural beauty of everything. The ...
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Re: Ebony
Knight Malachi here to review on a busy busy Review Day. This poem was . . . wow that was sad. Very emotional and sadly very true of what used ...
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Re: A Cup Of Hedgehog
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day, which is pretty hectic at the moment. So that is so cute!!!!!! I think that is awesome that you have your cute ...
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Re: Can You Grasp It In Your Hand?
Knight Malachi here to review on this grand and glorious, not to mention too-close-for-comfort Review Day. Stay ahead blue team!!!! You can feel the wind blow but, can you grasp ...
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Re: The Circle of Life (in the key of Em)
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. The forest winds its way from the wrist root to branches of fingers. There is mahogany in my knuckles, hammers that echo ...
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Re: Lords, Give Me Courage...
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. and one by one your backs have turned away. Now, I stand alone. At first I thought you should join the now ...
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Re: I Could Not Save You
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. gotta keep the blue team in the lead!!!! This is a good poem of how you can get lost in fame. And ...
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Re: Doom Making It's Way.
Knight Malachi here to review to keep blue team on this grand and glorious Review Day!!!!! First off the beginning makes it sounds like something disastrous is bound to happen, ...
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Re: Randomisty writing
Knight Malachi here to review both of these poems on Review Day. Go team blue!!!!!!! for Eternal: I really liked your rhyming. It flowed smoothly; about as good as you ...
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Re: Shoes Strap Your Feet to the Earth
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day and the YWS Default Background team. This story/poem was an interesting one as most are. I have to say that after this ...
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Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 2
Knight Malachi here to review on Review Day. So I think I liked this chapter better than chapter one in part because it seems shorter, and also because there is ...
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Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1
Knight Malachi here to review for Review day, even though you are on the opposite team. I did this review partly for the blue team, and partly because I never ...
Sep 29, 2013 - Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1 Sep 29, 2013
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Re: Elementary to High school
Knight Malachi here to review for team blue on Review Day. This is a very good poem with a good moral behind it, and I enjoyed reading it. But your ...
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Re: symbiosis
Knight Malachi here to review for you for Review Day. Go YWS Default Background!! So, this is a somewhat funny poem. i loved the lines: "Please don’t lay eggs under ...
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