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Knight Malachi here to review for team blue on Review Day. So this was a very emotional, but very well done story. I could really envision everything because you used ...

Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day, team blue! So, I didn't know this was part of a story, I just thought it to be a short story, but ...

Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. I'd seen your operation Imperial chapters being posted for quite some time, and finally thought I'd see what it was. So here ...

Knight Malachi here to review for team blue, on Review Day. This was a creative and a fun thing to write about I'm sure. I love all of the random ...

Knight Malachi here to Review for Review Day. Hey, lookie here, I found something I hadn't reviewed for you previously:) So when I noticed it was with "superheroes" I thought ...

Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day!!!! Aren't you excited? Anyway . . . This is the second or third of your short writings that I have read, and ...

Knight Malachi back to begin Review Day reviews again. This was very good, and very well thought out. your metaphoric language went well, and I especially liked the lines: i ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room, and Review Day/ blue team. Just reading the first few lines impressed me. they were beautiful! Whence the ...

Knight Malachi to review for Review Day. Negative first. I agree with ajruby12 that the first four lines could use better rhyming. I saw no other errors, but i didn't ...

Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. Paragraph one is composed of short sentences. Now some short sentences are fine, but not when you have this many. A small ...

Knight Malachi for team blue on Review Day. As well as Green Room reviews. When I cut the second time I believe it should be: "When I cut myself the ...

Knight Malachi for the Green Room review, as well as blue team on Review Day. This poem was very well written, and i liked the flow of it. i don't ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the YWS Default Backgrounds, on Review Day. So I don't really know the meaning of palm reading; is it a certain type of writing/reading? ...

Knight Malachi here to Review on Review day/night here in the USA. So this was very nicely done. I liked how it seemed as if the love died, and then ...

Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. so this idea sound fantastic to me. This sounds like it could b a really Really interesting book. I am writing a ...