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Re: Hallelujah
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. So I don't really know what this was about either. I was confused as to whether or not this in commemoration of ...
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Re: This, My Excavation
Knight Malachi here to Review for Review Day. So I don't know who Bon Iver is (please don't pound if he is famous") So this poem to me was weird. ...
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Re: Lacuna
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. I am claiming this for my badge to review another Green Room Knight, the name of the badge escaping my mind AT ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Nameless Generation - Prologue
Knight Malachi here to review on Review Day. This story was very nicely written, and very well detailed until Stephen heated up the milk. the night seemed to pass with ...
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Re: Your Words Will Change The World
Knight Malachi here to review on Review Day, and as a Knight of the Green Room. So there are lots of short stories and poems composed about this subject of ...
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Re: The snowy Moor
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day, and the Green Room Knights. This poem was short,fast,concise, and hilarious. Your descriptive language and detail made this not only easy to ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Not Yet Solved
Knight Malachi to review for Review Day!!!!! So you should have a period, not comma, here. I'll just sit here and stare at it a little longer, Maybe I just ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: No More Apologies
Knight Malachi to review for Review Day. So I am not big on romantic poems, but this wasn't half bad. I thought you did a fabulous job of using metaphors ...
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Re: Hobo Billy
Knight Malachi here to Review for the Knights of the Green Room on this splendid and exciting review Day. So this poem is somewhat sad, very random, and i don't ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Kira's Story, Chapter 1
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. This was good thinking over when I first read this Michael. I love starting it in the middle of the action, and ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Living Weapons: Chapter One
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room, as well as for Review Day. So this is an interesting start. I would suggest more detail, especially ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Pack - Chapter Two - Kaat
Here for review #2. The next bit is pretty good. I am glad that she finally broke out of their. i noticed a couple words jammed together. I believe one ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Mysterious Ways (chapter 1)
Knight Malachi here for KotGR and Review Day! I will put any problem i see here, and then put a summary at the end. 1.So, the beginning grabs the reader's ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Hairball
Knight Malachi here, 5 minutes before Review day begins. so I was laughing the whole, i mean whole time. This was so funny, especially the way you formatted it. Great ...
Sep 28, 2013 -
Re: Fire
Knight Malachi here too review for the Knights of the Green Room. So when I saw this title and the description I was pretty hyped up. I thought there was ...
Sep 28, 2013
