Messenger

Knight Malachi here to review as a Knight of the Green Room. first off, I am leaving the technical reviewing part to my fellow knight, Dragon. He will gladly find ...

Knight Malachi here to review. I can't say that I am especially surprised to read this. What place is more favorite to a writer then a place where he/she can ...

Knight Malachi here to review you. By the way, are you a Green Room Squire? So this poem was really well done. I like all of the opposites you had. ...

Knight Malachi here to review. so this is obviously not a poem with a real deep meaning. But it was fun to read, easy to read, and if there are ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So this is a truthful message. Thankfully in my church I do not see this, but I know ...

Knight Malachi of the Green Room Knights, here to review. So this was a beautiful poem. I loved your imagery and descriptive language. It was a very nice message. You ...

Knight Malachi hahaha here to hahaha review. So this is a fast, short, funny poem. And one that isn't so unrealistic. (Inside joke) I love your character's attitude, as well ...

Knight Malachi here to review. So this was rhyming well until the Death Valley line. Suddenly it didn't rhyme for a couple lines, and threw me off, as well as ...

Knight Malachi here to review take two. This was so much better. It allowed the reader to understand fully where and what was going on, as well as not having ...

Here to review for my 35th review as a Knight of the Green Room. @Hannah So this chapter doesn't seem too bad, but it could use a lot more description. ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. I will post problems I see, or things I really like in order as I read them. So ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. Wow! This poem has so much descriptive, imaginative, metaphoric writing. It was beautiful. I loved the whole thing. ...

Reviewing for the Knights of the Green Room be Knight Malachi. He looked really shinny to Xaba. Xaba has never seen a Very-bright-body-soul before, he only heard of them from ...

Knight Malachi to review. This is definitely poetic. Like Dreamy said it could probably go to music as well. Lots of songs are made from poetry. So since it is ...

Knight Malachi to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So I saw that every time you have I, it is not capitalized. i left you lying on the ...