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Re: Endless: VII
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knight of the Green Room. So this chapter wasn't at all what I was expecting . . . let's just skip to the ...
Sep 25, 2013 -
Re: The Princess's Feet
Here to review is none other then the one and only Knight Malachi. So this is one of the 2 haiku's I'v read on here. The other one was very ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Paxton Chapter Two
Knight Malachi here to Review for the Knights of the Green Room. Alright, so this divided is SO much better. It allows the reader to not fee like reading your ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Poems 2
Here as a Green Room knight. A Special World. I loved that poem. your metaphor of the cocoon was really cool, and done very well. I liked the whole poem, ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Endless: Part VI
I forgot to mention that it seems like every time the chapter ends, Ren is about to be shot. Also, I don't remember if you had much about this in ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Rebuilding Thunder: Chapter 1
OK, so this is an idea I was working with . . . anyway great idea, and I hope you continue it. It seems pretty interesting, and I hope to ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: What Happened to the Time
Here to review is Knight Malachi, for the KotGR. Wow, that was . . . beautiful. That was a sad poem, but it still had the hop that we will ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: In the Night
Knight of the Green Room Malachi here to review. Love this poem. It has such a good moral, and it is so true. This is a very encouraging poem. Being ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Endless: Part VI
I thought for a second. “Touché.” I said, and continued walking. Hahahahahahaha. Love that line. By the way, this is a review for the Knights of the Green Room. So ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Detachment
Here to review for KotGR. This was a very nice short story. It had a lot of emotion, and for your age it was very excellently written. I thought you ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Wanderlust
Here to give you the third Knights of the Green Room review for our library. So the bad first. This poem seemed a little confusing. First off I didn't know ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Untitled Work 3
This review is for the honor and glory of the Knights of the Green Room Now, this poem was well written. It all rhymed good, you have a talent for ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: The Masked
Knight Malachi here to review for the nights of the green room. This poem was spooooooooooky! I love the main line, 'the man with the mask.' That was a a ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: The Ghost
Knight Malachi here to review. This is a creepy poem. But understandably so since it's a bout a ghost. So, your rhyming was superb . . . until stanza three. ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Kingdom Come
Here to get a Green Room Knight review badge. I would suggest putting a star next to the name Eoferwic, and then at the bottom put how to pronounce it. ...
Sep 23, 2013
