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This poem was very well written. It captures a lot of emotions, and makes the reader feel as if they are there. It made me think of storms in a ...

Hahahhaaha. Ah . . . Fiera is THE best! I love how she can be so bossy and or at times mature, but then she returns to acting like a ...

So I liked this poem a lot, it was really well written. The songs stuck in their throats overpowered by the symphony of falling snowflakes. Their autumn flames doused, their ...

I have to say this is just a tad confusing. He slapped me down as I tried to finish him...I had let her go into the box, So it says ...

Hey, here to review. So this poem is really nice. I love the way describe all the things the wind can be seen doing. Like the part about blowing the ...

Alright! glad to be back to this story. glad that we at least know what gender this character is. :) This just adds more to the question list. Who is ...

I'll go through in order like the prologue. It was a normal day in the palace. It still sat atop the mountain foreboding and full of doom. Just like its ...

I just listed things as I saw them, and then put summary at the end. The three of them watched the smoke as if wafted up into the air, when ...

you look back on any remember. should be and, not any. I'm glad you wrote this. I was wanting to write something about 9/11, but I just didn't know what. ...

Malachi here to review on one of the best short stories I've ever read. What can I say? Your accuracy and precision in explaining every little detail is so awesome. ...

So this is such a short poem, yet more packed with truth then some 10+ lines. It's a hopeful poem, and I loved it. At first I read it and ...

Hahahahahha. This story is so random and strange that it's very funny. I laughed especially when he asked the teacher what the question meant. Her response and his thoughts were ...

This was a pretty good poem. I like how you come back to the phrase : Past the clouds that gather in herds, To the beautiful setting sun. That's a ...

I couldn't go more than a few sentences. I'm sorry but this just doesn't make sense. It'd totally wrong. No one, NO ONE, instantly decides to kidnap some random kids ...

Here are a few of your sentences, re-done wit the correct punctuation. I swinted at him I squinted at him. "Yea" I remarked "Yeah!" I remarked, "It is!" collage!" college!" ...