Messenger

There is one major problem with this story. You MUST have spaces between dialogue lines and other lines. Every time a dialogue line begins it must start on a new ...

Whoa! I was reading the first sentence and BOOM! the perspective changes from third to first person just like that. I would suggest keeping it on one perspective. If you ...

It's hard to find anything wrong with such a flawless piece of art. So my review will just be more of a congratulations for such a well written and well ...

Wow! hahahahaha. This was GREAT! From the beginning I was either smiling or laughing, due to your confusingly predictable (or is it unpredictable due to you trying to be predictable ...

I have to say that the past three chapters have been a little confusing. This one not so much, but you still have hardly any description or explanation of where ...

This is an interesting short story. At first I really wasn't sure why Cora was faking everything; why would she? It seemed almost as if she just wanted to have ...

This review is just gonna be random stuff I see along the way, and then a sum of it at the end. This had happened many times before, she had ...

Haha. This was great. Your first paragraph is really scary, it really captures the evil side of the spider. Then the description of what the spider wishes to do to ...

Malachi here to review. The third line should be silent, rather than "siler", that's just a small typo that can be easily fixed. Also, Is at the beginning of the ...

When I write, I am in control, but at the same time I am free to let the stories fall past on their own adventures. True, true, true. Writing can ...

Usually I put one section of the poem that i like most. This one just has too many. I would have to put the whole poem on my review to ...

Ah, how more perfectly true can a poem about writing poems get. I've felt this way before. poem writing can be hard. I'll have times when I want to write ...

This is another excellent poem. It's an interesting view. A very well written free-verse poem. I like that you show that it is God who is the decider, that he ...

This format is PERFECT for this poem. I love how you expressed the boy's thoughts. They are so like how it would b if this were a real meeting. And ...

WOW! Man can you write good! This is amazing! Your description, your imagery, your imagination, your description, is SO good. We imagine evil spirits pursuing us, and we engage them ...