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Re: Laughing Jack gives Aeliana a show!
I saw Laughing Jack so I thought id come by for more since ei was reading about him last night. Just a few quick thoughts tonight. I would have liked ...
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Re: Laughing Jack’s proxy pledge
Hi creepy, im back for another (and maybe one more since these are so short and sweet.....we'll, at least short) When the merry-go-round goes about and around Consider changing "about" ...
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Re: Carter’s poem
Hi creepy. Trooping on through the green room so I'm back once again for revmo and Team Tortoise It was the same thing every day, why bother to listen You ...
Sep 23, 2025 -
Re: Found but Gone
Hi Icarus! This is my first time seeing your work. Happy Review Month and go all Team Tortoises. Down by the waterfall, a pair sat. This was a sight to ...
Sep 22, 2025 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 16
I am back again and am so thoroughly out of ways to introduce myself so here we go and happy Saturday! His stomach growled in response to the scent of ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 15
Back for more! The observatory door creaked as Kei pushed it open, the sound echoing in the cavernous silence. Inside, the air was cool, carrying the faint metallic tang of ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 14
Yay, more chapters for revmo! Here we go I dont have any specifics for tonight. But I think this was one of my favorite chapters. The relationship between Kukui and ...
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Re: Nova’s angel
Back for one more review before I pass out! Penelope is a familiar name, but I cant recall at the time which story I read with her. “You…you did?” Ahahaha ...
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Re: ☠️🪦 Sebastian Shapcott 🪦☠️
Hi creepy. Have Revmo. I see more poetry, and I click. This a short one, so not a ton to say. The rhyming scheme is a bit all over the ...
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Re: Hills of Kest-Elin
Hi there! Happy revmo month. As a fellow fantasy writer and someone who dabbled in poetry this caught my eye. I cant believe it sunk into the green room for ...
Sep 17, 2025 -
Re: The Piano
Hi cat! I have seen you around but I haven't checked out anything you've written (besides reviews hehe) so I am here to change that tonight. Happy revmo! I get ...
Sep 16, 2025 -
Re: Among Thorned Roses
Hi there ink. This is my first time reviewing your work, but the title and genre caught my eye and I was looking for one more piece to review tonight, ...
Sep 15, 2025 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 13
Aha, it looks like I beat Cat this time. One thing she mentioned in her review that I forgot to point out in the last chapter is Kukui's wounds. To ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 12
Ack. Cats beat me and I almost forgot to get my reviews in for today! Anyway, I'm here now and still barely a member of team tortoise. Let's jump in. ...
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Re: Curious George
Heeeey its been a long time since I thought of Curoous George (although I just saw a quite dark robot chicken short of it the other day o.O) but I ...
Sep 13, 2025
