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Re: Williwaw Chapter 28
Good advice that I'll try to keep in mind. The same technical side that I know helps me stay more focused is also the side that can bite me in ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 27
Fear not, Gwyn will remain a strong side character for as long as she's around. As for Miles, this is seemingly like a necessary edit both for tone and character. ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 26
Haha ur a machine. I wanted to go more focused povs, hence acrual thoughts being included, but sometimes I tend to still avoid exposition even though it would be fine ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 24
Yeah I'm demanding myself that I finish a long form project for the first time since my very first book at 15
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 25
It's like getting presents %uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02 good points about Miles. Hopefully you like chapter 27 haha it may be a better iteration of him idk %uD83E%uDD37%u200D%u2642%uFE0F
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 24
I agree. I feel like you're really on my wavelength haha in the chapter where they sit on the mountainside after the dragon, I basically want to entirely re-write it ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 22
Bahaha welcome to the Club I guess. I'm actually glad you pointed out the dialogue tagging because that's been on my mind a lot recently. Dialogue is where I feel ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 21
Haha if it SEEMS off it probably is so just yell %uD83D%uDE02
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 21
Yeah. Any continuity errors you see PLEASE point out because that will easily be the biggest part of rewrites. I've changed, not just in some of the plot but also ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 20
Haha good points for sure. Hopefully that was improved in the more recent chapters, you'll just have to let me know!
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Re: The Legend of the Black Bull
Well to Sadoria he's not and this is from that perspective so yknow
Aug 24, 2023