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Hey there. Thanks. I do feel like I could remove a few words throughout. It's a personal preference of mine to usually not punctuation at the ends of lines, but ...

Haha thanks. Feel free to reas through the rest to catch up! I'm slowly writing %uD83D%uDE1B

Thanks for the reviews. Bouillion is not a great guy lol I'll keep the dialogue tagging in mind

yes, things will make more sense as you read the preface to this conversation xD

Williwaw probably needs a good grammatical edit beware %uD83D%uDE02

And if two guys show up in jeans, and plaid, and one has a leather jacket and a deep voice, driving a black 70 Impala, you should probably move states

Rings of Power is a precursor to the Lord of the Rings and Hobbit, but I would NOT recommend it xD it has a plethora of issues. I LOVE the ...

For the most part I think it moves pretty well. You have a lighter style than mine in regards to detail and description, but that doesnt make either one wrong. ...

ah see, that makes a lot of sense. Really it wasn't a long read, but for the sake of getting at least 2 reviews on both parts, I would just ...

So I haven't read this story at all but the title has serious Mark Lawrence vibes and I totally dig it!

Oh yis. Arthuroan is the town/fields and I'm gonnanhave to really go through and make sure it stays spelled consistently no thanks to Word. The ship is lower because it's ...

I guess I'm now realizing that I never made it clear enough that there are supposed to be several years between part 1 and 2 >.> but I will keep ...

Hey, between taking forever to review and me taking forever to write who knows who's worse%uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02 but thanks! Looks like you it into the spotlight

I will make sure to keep a note for revisions when it comes to their age %uD83D%uDC4D%uD83C%uDFFB and it was originally supposed to be 4 parts %uD83D%uDE02

You may have missed the 14 years dialog near the beginning of the conversation? I don't have an exact age for them tbh somewhere between 16-18ish which hopefully you get ...