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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 9 - Friend or Foe
Kenway is the GOAT no doubt about it
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Re: Fury in the wind chp 6 - Stumbling Through the Woods
ph my goodness yes. Tikaya said there were chapters that seemed out of order but all the titles looked correct. Thats definitely what happened so yes this comes right before
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Re: Fury in the Wind Prologue - A Shadow in the Snow
okay so the "monster" is kinda brand new and unknown 😂 so it isnt a piece of lore per se that folds in
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp. 3 - All the Djoni horses, all the Wsiwan men
lol those were not world building notes, I just put them there since I dont have a pronunciation page xD same thing with the ones in chapter 1
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 7 - The Final Straw
they are actually on the same continent so I may need to remind everyone a little more of how cold it is in chapter 5 xD different biomes but still ...
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Re: Fury in the Wind chp 5 - Night Encampments
I actually cut out almost 600 words on the beginning after my 2nd draft so Im really happy to hear how well that part flowed. Your thoughts on the 2nd ...
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Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Seven; The plot fog
I get them being paper. But shouldn't they come kn some sort of satchel to keep them safe from prying eyes? also I meant leafed lol
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Re: Fury in the Wind Prologue - A Shadow in the Snow
There is definitely a scene where I could work it in - The Satchel but I kinda really want the entrance of the mysterious figure from the get go because ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 21
hey new chapters!! I am back Kei felt his cheeks flush. “I—no! I just couldn’t sleep.” Her laugh was soft, almost teasing. “Sure, sure.” Need to split their dialogue lines ...
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Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 2 - The Brawl and Visitor
Full legal Name im DYING
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Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 2 - The Brawl and Visitor
Hey kid, ur not allowed back here
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Re: Agents of Time. Chapter Five. A royal castle
Verena feels very goal-oriented. I do A and then B and C which gets me to my goal of D. So yes she is learning the decorum, but she's doing ...
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Re: O believers of this town! verse
You're good Cats lol glitches happen @Wolfi
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Re: 4. The First Class (Conqueror Rising)
I dont know if it read faster ( I was deep in the newborn rocking chair while he sleeps trwnches) but I did think Sergius did a lot more interrupting ...
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Re: Our Perfect Worlds - Part 6
I think moving chapters teally depends on if there's more of Mara's backstory. If thats the only full one we get, it could be jarring? But if you said here ...
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