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Hey BLue! yeah, it really isn't that mean of a punishment, but like Castor cares about that. "IT ISN'T FAIR THAT THEY ARE DOING THIS OK! I DID NOTHING WRONG!" ...

hahahaha glad to here it mummy. I shall definitely take note of thine point-outs!

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Kinnard? heee heee heee who knows? And you can thank Mr. John Flanagan for the arrow-removing details! Wouldn't know a thing about it if it weren't for reading his books! ...

Still can't remember now can we mummy? and secrets are secrets XD

yes it is

Hey mummy, good point with the bees. I hate wasps and jackets and . . . will change :) Triune IS the God. The true one. And yesh, I should ...

not sure whether to leave a long review or a simple comment or just leave. i think the comment may make you mad XD

ahahaha. I love your little description. This is such a funny scene now that i've read the whole book.

thank you mummy, those are some good points I'll work on in post!

i seriously see no way in which to assist you. ^_^

can't say a thing. Perfect.

thank you Mummy. Yeah Kinnard is a little creepy. We shall see how he turns out when I edit. And yes, Kinnard is such a good name is it not? ...

but it made it sound like the actual laugh was maniacish but at the time you made it sound soft and sweet

umm, it was something about Fin remembering Ash's crazed laugh when she stabbed him