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hey Laure, thanks for the wonderful review! I must admit I am surprised at myself. I have long since rid m habit of writing short sentences (I'm saying this because ...

ok, thanks! *Adds to list of followers*

thanks for the review! I intend to give more detail of Jumper in the next chapter because I myself felt like their wasn't enough description, so if you stick with ...

i shall beat you to the finish lines *runs off*

Completely understand! :)

glad to hear you say all these things. I have a prologue, but upon reconsideration I'm going to cut it. You would possibly understand Castor more if you read it, ...

ah, so i wasn't too far off. Sadly, a lot of what you wrote is ALREADY happening. I don't think you need to say "the future" I don't understand what ...

any examples or suggestions?

It feels awkward, eh. As in HOW I wrote it, or WHAT I wrote? Indented?

Haha i am laughing at some of this. The part about arriving at the doctor's house, was because a previous reviewer thought that part to be confusing. But I can ...

indeed i do!

Is that like my new nickname? :)

OK, lemme first reply to your opening "typos" The His, was completely unintentional, LOL It is acceptable to use exclamation points in place of question marks, I am pretty sure. ...

Thanks Aurora! I didn't go into a ton of detail of Kalan, but I assure you his whole body is in shambles right now :P ?If you read the other ...

you may be back sooner. I'm on a roll :P Glad I caught most of the typos! I will never win the battle against commas. But! I will definitely try ...