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no, haha. It took 4 word wars.

you write as much as you can in 15 minutes!

yes, this was done in wordwars, so it was written very fast. I'm going to thoroughly go through part 2!

OK. I shall attempt to. I'm changing Miles so that he talks to himself more then just thinks things, in an attempt to make him more distinct. I think it ...

Miles could run for miles? Geddit? :P It amused me when I wrote it :P Why thank you for those. I think sometimes why I missed words is because I ...

haha ok ok that makes sense. A little more on Miles feelings versus thoughts?

not mean :P Do you have any suggestions. I wasn't planning on really "building up on his injuries" it was more focused on Miles and the other characters.

Hey Buggie, sorry, this was during those word wars. I'll try to edit typos from now on before posting. Now as for Kalan, this is only part one of the ...

mm yeah, didn't think of that. :)

Yeah I was thinking doing it in this order, Chpt 1 pt 1-2, chpt 3 pt 1 and 2, chpt 2 part 1-2, or switch it to: Chpt 1 pt ...

ah well if he made mistakes dats my fault.

i thought it was fast. Once this challenge is over I may come back and slow this down. Actually, I'm thinking I'll be switching the location of the chapters as ...

What they mean is, you are faithful in reviewing my chapters when they come out, rather then waiting.

Hi Wolfie, thanks for the review! I did some editing before posting, so that's probably why it was better. u had to laugh when you stated the sentence about the ...

hahahahahaha You make me laugh lost. That is a brilliantly snarky way of reviewing! ;) This is long, and I am planning on possibly scrapping it. But thanks for the ...