Messenger

We will go back. Sssh *Pats head* Sorry for the typos. Maybe I should read my stuff before posting . . . naaah :P This chapter was a little slow ...

sorry, I think that came out a little more forcefully then I intended. That last line just kind of irked me. I didn't realize it sounded so harsh, I didn't ...

i understand about the short, small, large, words, but the "short man" is merely a technique. I've seen lots of writers do it when they don't give a character's name ...

Wow thank you! This is very helpful for the technical side of editing stuff. It doesn't surprise me that there were this many mistakes. I had to write it in ...

Wow Rosey. Just when I think I've learned something, you come and BLOOOOOOOOOW my mind away! You have no idea how helpful that was, and I didn't even write this ...

you should give it a like then!

my goodness O.o *Rushes to edit* stop reviewing me! Review them :P

thank you! I'll hop on juicing those fights up! And adding Susie's features as well. I thought adding the bit to the card game would just add a little bit ...

Hey, I just posted chapter three, and at first I thought you had already reviewed THAT! ;) Anyway, yes the rope part actually was tricky do to a lot of ...

How did the word butternut get in there? Must've been auto-correct O_o

I thought it would :P

if you read the prologue you would know what Castor looks like :P

m'lad* :D

i keep on forgetting to add the age note! *shoots self* anyway, castor is 17 and kalan is a similar age . Miles is 15

first girl to say THAT about spiders