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Thank you Deanie! I shall try to not give you a heart attack next time but I had everything under control. I will hop on those nitpicks and be thinking ...

Forgot to reply to you yesterday, but thank you so much for this review. It really helps me. I will hop on those nitpicks and work on the others things ...

why does everyone say "We shouldn't judge"? If that's the case let crime run rampant cuz it' not our place to judge! sorry kind of ranting but that really bugs ...

*barf barf barf*

oh i gotcha

I actually forgot but was planning on making this part 1 of 2. There will be other characters to balance her, in fact probably in part 2. And yes some ...

That is true

I will be back in the morning to catch up with you Deanie

ho is this featured?

me sees this

no i like the comma things. After I realized how it worked I think it goes well. keep using it.

thank you. The part where she stopped was because she was making fun of people not sleeping when she herself is was up late. Jeric later says it, but I ...

good thing you put the disclaimer. I think you were making people even sadder :P

There was a lot of great visual detail, and the way you slipped it in with the action was awesome. (It's a feat I have yet to accomplish...) Yes!! Glad ...

The technical part is actually a writing style. I've seen other people write like that and I really like it so I used it here. The beauty sleep part is ...