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Thank you Fiend. I'll be working on when he wakes up to slow things down a little and also extend the end a tad. I'll let you know when chapter ...

Ah this is so hard. Nothing is as it seems in this review. No gonna say anymore. I'll try to add a little bit to it. But . . .

OK Liaya you have about thirty stories going so I can't keep track of you ;)

I'm happy and impressed to see someone on here is actually consistently sticking with their novel past chapter 5

you got that right ;)

you just keep getting 'em!Never knew I could help so much

you got 24 likes!!!!!

yeah i understand, but it comes out looking kind of wrongi think

ooh those were good. They didn't make the story seem longer but they really helped.

Thanks for the review! Praise be that I did do some research for a short story I wrote a few years ago based in the same time period or I ...

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your heart

Yes it is the heart and soul!

Yes!

ooh you are getting closer.