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Wow. Thank you for the review. I wasn't expecting such good things about it. LandStriker was just a name that came up at the moment. I might change it. I ...

Oh wow. That is just so powerful in such a short amount of words. You wrote this perfectly too. I absolutely loved it. Also, I wasn't sure if this was ...

Thank you. I will get on the double words, and please do read the sequel. I think it will explain a little bit more of your disappointment.

Loved it.

That was beautiful!

Thank you that helps!!! You might want to read the sequel. ;)

This chapter is un-edited, so don't feel the need to point out the overuse of commas. When I wrote this I wasn't to learned in the use of commas. :)

Most of what you say is right. I never have edited any of these chapters, so the commas make sense. I used to be a commaholic. The age group is ...

Thanks for the review. Snickers is not the main character. Keep reading to find out more. There are lots of characters.

Thanks for the review. Snickers is the main character. Keep reading to find out more.

Hehehe. Hilarious. Just came off watching three of the four Tolkien movies, so Gollum is fresh in my mind. Great poem.

Oh, I for got, these lines nearly broke me down to tears: v= Do you know the feeling, To be nineteen and write your rown will...? Do you know the ...

And it didn't give me the spacing!!! forget it.

Thanks Industrio! do you have a nickname that is shorter?

Yah, I see whatcha mean. Will look into it.