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Glad to hear you like it. It should be a lot better when I get done with what smankse pointed out.

I'm guessing so.

You said exactly my thoughts. My reviews have mostly been about the writing itself, but you hit my personal thoughts on the head.

Alright, and no prob.

Alright. Next chapter I put up will be edited before-hand.

Knight Malachi here to do a final review for the day, for the KotGR And a perfect one to top off the day. I have to say thank you for ...

I couldn't have said it better!

It was a little hard to take, but you did it in a spirit of graciousness and wanting to help, which makes a big difference. Hey, sorry I still haven't ...

Hahahaha. Hey, have you checked out Is It a Dream?

Well you may manage to still read it out of order somehow:)

Thanks for the review. My E key has lots of problems, and this was a rough draft, so that is why there are so many pretty obvious things. Thanks though, ...

Very welcome.

Yeah, that isn't the standard way to rad stuff. ;)

On it now.

Alright, finally here. So the point of view here is more of a bystanders view. I didn't really want to get too much into the heads of the fighters because ...