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Don't feel pressured to leave a like; this is just a reminder if you meant to but forgot. I don't want to pressure you to like it. :)

And by the way Imhero, if you want someone to actually take your review too seriously, I would try to use a more tactful beginning and ending. it really doesn't ...

For some reason I can't get spaces in between the stanza breaks. I've tried it several times but it doesn't save it. I'm not sure why.

OK, thanks a lot ED. I don't know how much I will change this all, but as with my sunset poem, this is the first feed back I've gotten, so ...

Thanks Dreamy, please continue reading if you like the story. And if you really like it please leave a like.

OK, Imhero, I like this poem the way it is, and other than a few changes I'll keep it the way it is. What I wrote is from what God ...

Thanks a lot. :)

The last four lines are supposed to a separate stanza from the other. That is why the last one is so long. Thanks for the review and like.:)

Thanks a bunch DarkKnight9. This is a rough draft and I'm gonna get to editing it sometime today.

Thanks for pointing those things out. I already noticed that the part with the floating cloud doesn't sound very good. I'll get on those other typos as well. thanks for ...

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So I actually added some more stanzas. :) I felt like it would maybe help. It completes the story of the sun's journey. Anyway, I'll get to it some more ...