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Ir swear I fixed that reality's line like 4 times BUT it is fixed in my microsoft document finally LOL It's really interesting how you took the monster in the ...

why did I never reply to this. I've read this review many times haha and this poem will be inserted into draft 1.2 very soon ;P

Hi there! Thanks for stopping by. This whole thing came from me envisioning a lightssber duel on ice, but I don't do fan-fic so I wrote this instead. I do ...

@soundofmind could you be troubled to look at this?

hi imp, thanks for the review! :) I agree with the powers of Zora. I think if I were to come back to this world I would flesh out how ...

i do love Lovecraft vibes so thanks for that shoutout :P

Oh yeah sometimes the publishing center gobbles up formatting for whatever reason. Happens to me a lot in poetry and lyrics

@Alliyah or some mod can you delete this?

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hi there! Happy Review Day and Happy Holidays! What an intriguing title... I feel it ironic how a company founded on the production of baby soap stumbled across the means ...

Really good points Q! I could definitely add some to loop his family in from beginning to end, to really pull it tight.

Aww thanks Ellie :) I actually haven't written in first person or present tense in a long time, but it just felt right for this piece. I'm glad it resonated

Oh and you should look up williwaw

Haha most of those sentences I've pointed out for myself in my re-reada. And YES he's doing a villain slouch. The eggs thing is the saying that you have to ...

Thanks Ole bean. One thing I'm definitely working on is making actions more active such as your suggestion for Alec giving a stern look so good to know it's sticking ...

Thanks for the review! Take your time by all means. I'm currently working on draft 2 which may have some huge changes, so if you like feel free to wait ...