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Hey there! This poem has a very nice structure that fits in perfectly. I also liked how you used an imagery. These three lines in particular: Broken Vows Young as ...

Wow. This is a beautiful poem. It flows perfectly and the structure is great! I loved how you've put rhyme in there as well. It has a really nice gentle, ...

Great job on the poem. I really like how you used imagery, it really is a beautiful piece. :)

I liked how some of the lines rhymed, liked: But look up to sky above And the stars will remind you of our love and If you fly you could ...