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Mickeystwin33

  • Other Poetry Re: You are science.

    This is an amazing poem. It is the first poem I've read on here and liked, because I finally figured out how too. It is definitely a great poem. I ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Why?

    I loved this story.Great use of the language. I am a little bit confused though. Did she kill him? Did he kill her? Why is her blood all over him? ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Argument of the Fried Brains

    I love this poem. I wish I could write something that good out of something like that, but I'm not that talented. I really like this poem, just because it ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Kindness Can Change A Life

    There once was a girl, Scared of everything, She thought of herself, As a worthless void, She was bullied, By peers, And beat, By siblings. Her parents were gone, Both ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Research Re: Does This Sound Cliche?

    I wrote an Informative piece for my high school speech team. At the first speech competition I placed 6th, which is pretty good. I practiced really hard for the next ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Unnoticed

    This is one of the best short stories I have ever written. I loved it, mostly because I am a person whose good deeds go unnoticed. I love the title, ...

    Dec 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: An endless dream

    Your story was great. It drew me in, and I could not look away. You are an amazing writer, and almost made me cry at the end. I didn't see ...

    Dec 28, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: an unrecognized blog!

    What link??

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Why hello there!

    Welcome I hope you like this site as much as I do. If you have any questions don't hesitate to ask.

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey! I'm Beka.

    Hello Beka, Welcome to the site, I found this site the same way you did, and I love it so I know you will. If you have any questions at ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mannequin Love

    Wow your poem is amazing I love it. I thought it was so great. A mannequin is not something that everyone can write a poem about. I saw the title ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pride Before Drown

    I thought it was a great poem. Yours is one of the first poems on here where the proper use of commas and periods is used, thank you for that. ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Way Things Are

    I loved this story. I thought you had some very good ideas and points in this story. I'm sorry I'm not good at reviewing, but I don't see anything wrong ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Girl in Blue

    I loved the story. I could relate so much, because I was a little girl who would walk by the kickball field and playground, just to hear what people where ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Life Through the horses eyes.

    I thought your story was great. You gave a lot of information, that can be both good and bad. You don't want to bire the reader, but you also don't ...

    Nov 28, 2010


It's crazy how your life can be twisted upside down inside out and around and you can get sushi from safeway still looking like a normal person
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