MidnightVampire

I can't do the little quote thingys so here it is. When it says "Before he could reach Thomas however (comma) two hooded ...." and the paragraph after that, I ...

Man, that is good. I can't write romance like that. Not even if I tried really hard, and I mean really, really hard. Uh, the previous person mentioned a lot ...

Ok, here's one no one mentioned, it said that a man and a child crossed the street with out even aknologing her. Would that mean that she almost ran over ...

Well, I forgot who ayumi was. ( that's my issue not yours) I liked this, I wasn't able to read the entire thing (because I didn't know who Auyumi) but ...

seraphTree went on saying how the beginning didn't catch her interest, saying it was good, but could have been a little more catching. This beginning, however, is quite intersting to ...

Ok, I would so totally read this ( sorry for the teenager talk). I love your descriptions. It seems something that my friend would read. I like the whole wolf ...

Why did you use.... the name. ( you should know what i"m talking about.) Um, hmm. I liked it. I'm not going to give you a big critique, that will ...

I thought this was interesting. It made me wonder why she was walking around, who were her people. ( if you put it in there, then I may have still ...

I liked this. I agree, with a little backround of the boy and I think I would be draun ( I know I spelled this wrong.) to reading this. There ...