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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Shattered Love

    Mmmm . . . you are a very talented writer! Let's see what I can do to help you improve, even though you don't need much at all! First Story: ...

    Mar 6, 2009


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge